I chose this graph because it is very easy to see visually and also was on my recommended charts list.

Fact 1 Tasmanian devils are endangered and going extinct which is very scary I am very scared as well oh and they also used to be Tasmanian devils in Australia but now Tasmania is the only place they have them.

Fact 2 Tasmanian devils are fighting a disease where it might get them extinct and gone forever the disease is where the devils get tumors when fighting with other tassies or for another reason.

The crocodile that was orange collapsed onto the ground due to agustion within his body. He went to the doctor the doctor said take this medicine one a week and you will get better and if you don’t, however, you will get sick and sick until you can die from this rare disease. The croc went back home and tried the medicine he felt much better than last time when he went to the doctor then a few weeks later he saw the results he was bright happy green and was back swimming in the lake.

I just could not eat something so I chucked it in the bin mom said pick it up and eat it and I took a tiny bite from it was not that bad in fact I could take another bite from it. again I was satisfied by the taste and then mom said is it good I replied its really nice could I have another and she said sure and then I was completely addicted to them that in fact I could eat them all day and that time was where I learnt a lesson and that was to always have aa try of different things you won’t know what it will taste like.

word count: 113

Punctuation:

I have included

• capital letters for: beginning sentences, proper nouns and titles
• question marks
• full stops
• commas: in lists, for pauses and to make meaning clear
• apostrophes: for contractions (e.g. do not becomes don’t) and to show ownership (e.g. That is Lee’s pet dog.)
• exclamation marks
• quotation marks (speaking marks)
• colons: in titles, for set of lists
• semi-colons
• brackets: round or square
• hyphens

Spelling:

Spelling:

I have

• checked the spelling of any unknown words
• not confused words that sound the same
• used correct endings for plurals

Grammar:

I have included

• a varity of different verbs
• correct verb tenses (past, present, and future tenses) (verb tense activities 1, 2, 3)
• correct verb-subject (noun) agreement

(e.g. The rubbish bin (singular subject) was (verb) full. or The rubbish bins (plural subject) were (verb) full.)

• appropriate adverbs to describe verbs
• suitable nouns
• appropriate pronouns
• interesting adjectives
• suitable conjunctions

(A conjunction is a part of speech that connects two words, phrases or clauses together.)

• a variety of prepositions

(A Preposition links nouns, pronouns and phrases to other words in a sentence e.g. under, with, on, at, to

The cat went under the table)

Writing:

I have read through my writing to check that

• it makes sense
• it is easy to understand
• paragraphing is appropriate
• there are no double negatives

(e.g. I am not going to buy no bananas)

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Movie making special effects can cost millions of dollars.

Douglas Trumbull made some of the effects in different movies. 

Some scenes of the Harry Potter movie were made in Australia.

Why does special effects and movie making the cost so much?

Why can’t you just use editing programs like Flimora etc?

Special effects can cost millions of dollars because they are really rare.

Adding effects to anything or even editing can take hours to do.

As slime dripped through…. I was devastated all the hard work turned out to be nothing. I did not know what to do next when all I could think of is to give up. Now what I was trying to do was create red slime that was really slippery but unfortunately it dripped through the cup so I have to start all over again. So I decided to start the experiment again it approximately takes 5 hours to get it to be red and then it took another 3 hours to make it slippery after 8 hours I MADE IT I did the experiment and presented to the class.

Word Count: 106          

Norway is the happiest in the world.

Africa and Syria are in the bottem of the list in happense

we are ninth in happience 

Why is norway in the top of the list

why are we 9th in the list

The goverment is one of the most important thing to happiness

Goverment is the important because of the decsions they make 

The Black Plague is one of the most deadliest diseases in human history and it killed 75 million to 200 million people in Europe between 1300’s AD and 1340’s AD . It was spread by rats and killed 60% of Europe’s population and here are some of the symptoms:

• Vomiting
• Coughing ( may be with blood )
• Fever or fatigue
• Shortness of breath
• Headaches

It was also spread by fleas person to person and so on… My last thing i want to say is that we are so lucky that we don’t have this disease right now so we should thank the scientist for finding the cure.

Most Australians speak English.

Aiden tasmen  went to tasmania if he stayed we would be speaking dutch.

The British used to set up colanys in aus.

Why were the Aboriginals treated badly?

Why could’t the British go with the Aboriginals?

The Aboriginals stayed here for 40,000 years.

I understand why women could not vote until 1902.